“Assisted.” “Helped.” “Worked on.” Even your verbs are on an internship.
THE ROAST REPORT
Sample roast4/10
“Responsible for… being responsible”
Not a single number. Is this a resume or a very vague autobiography?
“Excellent communication skills” is doing a lot of talking for a document that says so little.
You probably did good work. This document is keeping it a secret. Trade the vague claims for clear actions and real impact.
THE COMEBACK
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